2017 23. 16th Seduction

By James Patterson and Maxine Paetro

Rating 2 out of 5

I’m not finished yet, but I have to put down some of the really terrible, sloppy writing in this book.  The whole book is sloppy with cheesy, bad writing.  In chapter 70, the medical examiner comes into the squad room (from another building) wearing bloody scrubs.  I’m pretty sure that wouldn’t happen and isn’t allowed. In chapter 72, some people go into an interview, and the two parties are said to have pushed the play buttons on their recorders.  I’m fairly certain they pushed the record buttons.

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